雅思寫作中的論述有哪些要求? 什麼叫擺事實、講道理!

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雅思寫作中的論述有哪些要求? 什麼叫擺事實、講道理!

Q: 雅思寫作中的論述有哪些要求? 什麼叫擺事實、講道理!

A:

雅思的學術寫作,要求的擺事實、講道理。事實,需要是確鑿的事實;道理,必須是符合邏輯的道理。

回顧上一個例子:

As water is a valuable resource, governments all over the world should control how much water their citizens use. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

開頭段:

It is universally acknowledged that water has been considered as one of the most valuable resources on earth. …

主體段一:

Nowadays, the consumption of water tends to soar due to the growing population and the increasing demand in agriculture and industry. Consequently, …

主體段二:

However, some people object to the intervention from government and believe citizens have the right to use water as they want. In general, the main concern is that the limitation of water use may lower the living standard and cause inconveniences in daily lives. In other words, …

本段引用他人觀點作為論證的論據,而不是基於事實和邏輯。

再看一個例子:

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

一個同學的作文,是這樣的:

It is fair to say that increasing the price of petrol could reduce the frequency of vehicles use, to some degree, to avoid traffic congestion. Nevertheless, it seems to change a little. For one thing, even though the use frequency decreases, the incomplete traffic system still exists, such as imperfect traffic rules, misbehaviors from individuals and improper arrangements of traffic signals or overpasses. …

這段論述有什麼問題?

這段論述中,為論述提高燃油價格的局限性,提出了交通和污染問題的其它原因,如交通系統的不完善。但the incomplete traffic system still exists, … 在邏輯上,意味著traffic system 一直不完善。而這,並不是確鑿的事實。在表達上,是一種overgeneralization。

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